Less Is More
by Tracy Chevalier
Twelve years ago I left a job in publishing to do an MA in creative writing. My boss, Daniel - a fine editor who taught me everything I know about fixing bad writing - gave me as a farewell present an eraser inscribed with the famous dictum by the architect Ludwig Mies van der Rohe: LESS IS MORE. At the time I thought he was simply being witty, but in retrospect he couldn't have been more prescient if he had thrust a Vermeer painting in my arms and said, "Here, write about this - and keep it simple!"Simplicity is a virtue that comes with experience. When I look back on early writing attempts, I cringe at my wordiness: the unnecessary adverbs, the elaborate synonyms for said (exhorted, anyone?), the tortuous formal sentence structures. As an editor I began to apply the less is more approach to others' writing, muttering to myself, "When in doubt, cut it out," as I wielded my red pen.
But it was really only when I wrote the novel Girl With a Pearl Earring and decided to try to imitate Vermeer's painting technique with words that I incorporated spareness into my own style. A poet friend helped, looking at my sentences and showing me how many words were unnecessary and could be discarded without losing meaning. It's surprising how little you need to tell a story. Vermeer painted many of his works in the same corner of the same room and he managed to reveal a whole world in that corner. I too discovered that simplicity doesn't mean a story is less complex
Ove the years I have applied "Less is More" to other parts of my life too. I wear less jewelry now - earrings or neclace, not both. I use tinted lip balm rather than lipstick and apply mascara only to my upper lashes. I avoid patterns in clothes. I listen to sonatas more often than to symphonies.
Sometimes I'll read a particularly baroque sentence in a novel and say to myself, I wish I could do that - rather the way a woman accustomed to wearing Armani might wonder whether she could pull off a Versace moment. But I know what's best for me - I've applied Daniel's eraser to my writing and to my life and it has made all the difference.
repost from American Elle: "The Most Important Thing I've Learned"
Image: 'Beckoning' by Mike Pedersen
Image: 'Beckoning' by Mike Pedersen
6 comments:
oooo I'm trying....I'm trying....paring down on 'stuff' is our first step...
Yes, yes and yes! I have trouble with less...but keep trying!
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Definitely agree... "When in doubt, cut it out,"
This new Life Sessons Feature was an amazing read. Can't wait for more! xxx
I usually believe less is more but I'm rather overdressed than underdressed.. I still dress quite classic pieces, loving clean lines but also lace, adoring black in clothes but loving dramatic make-up.. The most important thing in everything (not just in dressing) is not to make it seem messy and keeping it elegant :) Buon weekend bella!
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